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When the Screen Went Dark

Analyze an original storm narrative, then plan and draft a scene using vivid details, dialogue, deliberate pacing, and a connected ending.

Grade 6ELAInteractive · Printable

Aligned toW.6.3

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  • Single worksheet
  • Auto-graded online
  • 1 Common Core standard
  • Printable answer key
  • 13 questions
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Format
Interactive · Printable
Grade
Grade 6
Subject
ELA
Question types
Multiple choice, Circle the answer, Short answer

About this worksheet

What students practice

  • Students develop a narrative through a clear viewpoint, vivid details, dialogue, and deliberate pacing.
  • Students organize events and create an ending that follows from a character’s experience.

How to use

Read the model together, then have students complete the craft questions independently. Use the final planning frame and scene as the starting point for a longer narrative.

Curriculum

Common Core standard covered

W.6.3

Tell a story, real or made up, with a narrator or characters, vivid details, dialogue and pacing, and an ending that follows from what happened.

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When the Screen Went Dark

Build a storm narrative with purposeful details, dialogue, and pacing.

Read Like a Writer

Read the student narrative. Consider how the writer makes one storm memorable.

When the Screen Went Dark

1By seven, our outdoor movie screen stood above the community center lawn like an enormous white envelope. I had spent the afternoon helping my cousin Selin arrange chairs. Now I stood beside my careful rows, holding the seating chart against my chest. This was my first evening volunteering, and I wanted everything to stay exactly where I had put it.

2Before the movie began, a cold gust lifted the corner of my chart. The screen bulged. Beyond it, clouds erased the last strip of gold above the buildings. Mr. Vega, the event director, checked the weather alert on his phone and announced that everyone needed to move into the center. Around us, chairs scraped and families gathered their bags.

3I reached for a chair. “We should stack these first,” I told Selin. Another gust snapped the paper in my hand. She pointed toward the open doors. “Leave them. We’re supposed to go inside.” I followed her, but I kept looking back at the crooked rows.

4From behind the lobby windows, we watched the rain arrive. One drop struck the glass. Then three. Then the lawn vanished behind silver lines. I pressed my palm against the cool window. Outside, a loose program slid beneath a chair and disappeared. The screen shuddered, and the lights on the lawn blinked out.

5For several minutes, people stood with folded arms, watching the windows. Then Selin found a deck of cards in her bag. I pulled two lobby tables together. “Who wants to learn a game?” I asked. Soon, wet sleeves rested beside small piles of cards, and laughter rose over the drumming roof.

6The movie never started that night. When Dad arrived, I was explaining the rules to a younger player. My seating chart had dried into a wrinkled square in my pocket. I left it there and finished dealing.

1.
Which description correctly identifies the narrator and viewpoint?
  • A. An outside narrator reports what every guest thinks about the storm.
  • B. A student volunteer tells the experience through a first-person viewpoint.
  • C. Selin tells the experience through her own first-person viewpoint.
  • D. An outside narrator addresses the reader as a volunteer at the event.
2.
What does the narrator initially want, beyond helping with the event?
  • A. To persuade Selin to take charge of the evening
  • B. To keep the arrangements under personal control
  • C. To replace the movie with a different activity
  • D. To join the families watching the weather indoors
3.
In paragraph 1, underline the sentence that most directly establishes the narrator’s desire to keep control of the arrangements.

By seven, our outdoor movie screen stood above the community center lawn like an enormous white envelope.I had spent the afternoon helping my cousin Selin arrange chairs.Now I stood beside my careful rows, holding the seating chart against my chest.This was my first evening volunteering, and I wanted everything to stay exactly where I had put it.

4.
Why is paragraph 2 an effective turning point in the narrative?
  • A. It introduces a weather problem that interrupts the narrator’s careful plan.
  • B. It explains how the narrator learned to arrange chairs before the event.
  • C. It resolves the narrator’s concern by showing that the storm has passed.
  • D. It shifts the setting to another event with a different group of volunteers.
5.
In paragraph 3, how does the exchange between the narrator and Selin develop the scene?
  • A. It contrasts the narrator’s concern for the setup with Selin’s urgency.
  • B. It shows that both characters agree the chairs should come first.
  • C. It explains why Selin has decided to cancel the movie herself.
  • D. It reveals that neither character has heard the director’s instructions.
6.
Which explanation best describes the pacing at the beginning of paragraph 4?
  • A. A summary of the whole evening moves quickly past the rain.
  • B. A sequence of tiny observations stretches out the rain’s arrival.
  • C. A flashback interrupts the storm to describe an earlier evening.
  • D. A long conversation delays the account of the changing weather.

Make Narrative Choices

Choose revisions that serve the story. Then plan and write your own storm scene.

7.
A writer wants to replace “The storm was loud” with a precise sound detail from inside the lobby. Which sentence best meets that goal?
  • A. The storm outside the lobby seemed powerful and quite unusual.
  • B. The lobby windows reflected the bright ceiling lights above us.
  • C. The wet evening reminded me of several other stormy nights.
  • D. Rain rattled the metal awning above the lobby’s entrance doors.
8.
Which added line would fit immediately after the narrator pulls the lobby tables together in paragraph 5? Keep the established first-person viewpoint.
  • A. The narrator brushed a damp card across a sleeve and made room for a player.
  • B. You brush a damp card across your sleeve and make room for another player.
  • C. I brushed a damp card across my sleeve and made room for another player.
  • D. Selin secretly decided that the narrator had finally learned an important lesson.
9.
A draft includes a full page about guests parking their cars before they arrange chairs. The parking causes no later problem. Which revision would best keep attention on the storm and the narrator’s response?
  • A. Add dialogue for each driver so every arrival becomes a complete scene.
  • B. Move the parking account to the ending without shortening its details.
  • C. Condense the arrivals into one sentence before the chair setup begins.
  • D. Replace the parking account with a long list of the guests’ belongings.
10.
Which transition most clearly signals that the card game begins after a period of waiting?
  • A. Earlier that afternoon, Selin took out a deck of cards.
  • B. After several quiet minutes, Selin took out a deck of cards.
  • C. Before anyone went inside, Selin took out a deck of cards.
  • D. Meanwhile, out on the lawn, Selin took out a deck of cards.
11.
The writer wants to strengthen paragraph 5 with dialogue that invites others into the new activity. Which line best serves that purpose?
  • A. “The chairs were straight before the wind came,” I told Selin.
  • B. “Pull up a chair; we can teach you as we play,” I told a family.
  • C. “This chart is getting harder to read,” I said, unfolding the paper.
  • D. “My dad should be here later tonight,” I said, watching the door.
12.
Why does the final action—leaving the chart in a pocket and finishing the deal—create an ending that follows from the story?
  • A. It shows the narrator choosing the shared activity over the original arrangements.
  • B. It shows the narrator preparing to restore the original seating before leaving.
  • C. It shows the narrator expecting the director to restart the outdoor movie.
  • D. It shows the narrator deciding to stop volunteering at future community events.
13.
Plan and write a short narrative about a memorable storm, real or imagined. Use a situation different from the model’s movie event.
Plan: Label four brief notes: (1) narrator and setting, (2) what the storm interrupts, (3) the key moment you will slow down, and (4) an ending caused by the character’s actions.
Draft: Write 100–140 words. Establish the situation, keep a consistent viewpoint, use at least two sensory details and one line of dialogue, slow down the key moment, and end with a result that follows from what happened.

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