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A Sound Map in Paint: The Editing Pass
Edit a community mural article for inappropriate shifts in verb voice and mood while preserving meaning and purposeful changes.
Grade 8ELAInteractive · Printable
Aligned toL.8.1.d
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- 1 Common Core standard
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- Interactive · Printable
- Grade
- Grade 8
- Subject
- ELA
- Question types
- Fill in the blank, Multiple choice, Matching, Circle the answer, Sorting, Short answer
About this worksheet
What students practice
- Students recognize inappropriate shifts in verb voice and mood in an article and related editorial material.
- Students revise verb shifts while preserving meaning, sentence purpose, and grammatical focus.
- Students distinguish purposeful changes in voice and mood from shifts that need repair.
How to use
Have students read the draft before completing the editing tasks. Discuss why a change in voice or mood is not automatically an error, then use the final response to assess independent revision.
Curriculum
Common Core standard covered
Recognize and fix shifts in verb voice and mood that do not fit.
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A Sound Map in Paint: The Editing Pass
Recognize purposeful changes in voice and mood, and repair distracting shifts.
Read the article draft
This original article contains several intentional editing problems. Consider each passage's purpose before deciding whether a shift needs revision.
The Block Has a Soundtrack
1The community center's blank side wall is becoming a painted map of neighborhood sounds. Rather than drawing streets, residents are arranging shapes that represent familiar noises: a bouncing basketball, a rattling delivery cart, and a screen door clicking shut. Teen volunteers invited residents to describe sounds they associate with the block. The project began with listening, not painting.
2Can a painted line suggest a sound? The article raises this question to invite readers to consider the project's central challenge. At a planning session, participants compared sharp zigzags with loose circles. Some connected zigzags with rattling sounds; others imagined sudden footsteps. These differences became material for discussion rather than reasons to reject someone's idea.
3The planning notes are supposed to show how two coordinators divided their responsibilities. Dalia organized the listening walks, while the residents' sketches were collected by Renzo. Both coordinators wanted people who could not attend a meeting to contribute. They accepted descriptions on paper as well as drawings. The final design includes several interpretations of the same sound.
4A small box beside the article will give residents a sequence of direct instructions for submitting a memory. Describe one sound from your block, and then a shape should be drawn beside your description. The box will also explain where residents can leave their papers. Submissions do not need polished artwork; rough marks can communicate an idea.
5Dalia imagines a version of the project with more room for each contribution. “If the wall were twice as wide, every sound has its own section,” she says. Renzo prefers the overlapping design because sounds overlap on the block itself. Neither coordinator treats the mural as a complete record. They expect future viewers to notice something the painters missed.
6Before painting began, the wall was cleaned and the cracks were filled. These sentences follow the wall's preparation rather than assign credit for individual jobs. During the final review, the panel recommended that the outline remain simple and that each sound is represented by more than one shape. The team kept several open spaces in the design. Those spaces leave room for memories that have not yet been shared, and the coordinators plan another listening session after the mural opens.
- A. Keep it because the question introduces an issue the following discussion explores.
- B. Revise it because the opening question accidentally directs residents to draw.
- C. Revise it because the following statements describe an imagined future session.
- D. Keep it because the statements report answers collected in a formal survey.
Can a painted line suggest a sound?The article raises this question to invite readers to consider the project's central challenge.At a planning session, participants compared sharp zigzags with loose circles.Some connected zigzags with rattling sounds; others imagined sudden footsteps.These differences became material for discussion rather than reasons to reject someone's idea.
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