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Leo Adds Details: Revising with Help

Follow Leo as a teacher and a friend ask questions about his soccer draft, then practice staying on topic and adding details to improve writing.

Grade 1ELAInteractive · Printable

Aligned toW.1.5

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Single worksheet
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1 Common Core standard
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8 questions
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Details

Format: Interactive · Printable
Grade: Grade 1
Subject: ELA
Question types: Fill in the blank, Multiple choice, Matching, Circle the answer, Sorting, Short answer

About this worksheet

What students practice

Students respond to questions from an adult and a peer to improve a draft.
Students find a sentence that does not stay on the topic.
Students add details that tell who, where and how someone felt.

How to use

Read Leo's story together and talk about each question he gets. After students finish, ask them to share their own draft sentence with a partner and revise it with their questions.

Curriculum

Common Core standard covered

W.1.5

With adult help, focus on a topic, respond to questions and suggestions from peers, and add details to strengthen writing.

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Leo Adds Details: Revising with Help

Answer questions and suggestions to make writing better.

Read about Leo

Leo got help to make his writing better. Read what happened.

Leo Writes About Soccer

1Leo wrote about his soccer game. Here is his first draft:

2I played soccer. We won. My dog is brown. It was fun.

3Ms. Park read his draft. She asked, "Who played with you? Where was the game? What was the best part?" She also said, "Let's keep every sentence about soccer."

4Leo told her, "My cousin Ana played with me. We played at the park. My best part was kicking the winning goal."

5Leo's friend Omar read it, too. He said, "Tell how you felt when you scored." Leo felt proud and happy.

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