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A Weekend Between the Lines

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A Weekend Between the Lines

Edit a camping diary for clear parenthetical details.

Read the Diary

Extra information can be set off with commas, parentheses, or dashes. A detail needed to identify a particular person or thing is not set off.

Sunday Evening: What I Brought Home

1Friday afternoon, I packed my notebook beneath my sleeping bag. I expected our camping weekend to produce a few funny diary pages, mostly about my cousin Rafi trying to fold a tent. Aunt Selin, our most experienced camper, checked the equipment while I pictured a perfectly organized trip. I had even drawn little boxes beside each activity on my schedule.

2At the campsite, we divided the jobs before unpacking. Rafi carried the tent poles to a level patch of ground. Our tent (borrowed from a neighbor) had room for all three of us. I spread the groundsheet beside the equipment bags. Once the tent stood upright, I checked the first box on my schedule with a flourish.

3Saturday refused to fit inside my boxes. Our planned walk—my choice for the morning—took longer than expected because I kept stopping to sketch unfamiliar leaves. Rafi waited without pointing at his watch. Later, he wanted to sit beside the creek and listen to the water. I almost reminded him that we were supposed to practice knots, but I closed my notebook instead.

4After dinner, Aunt Selin asked what we wanted to do next. I opened my mouth to read the schedule, then noticed that Rafi had arranged three folding chairs where we could see the evening sky. My notebook, now smudged with dirt, stayed in my pocket. We sat until the first stars appeared, trading guesses about the sounds beyond our campsite.

5This morning, I found several empty boxes on my schedule. Beside them, I wrote about a crooked leaf sketch, a creek that sounded different with my eyes closed, and a conversation I had not planned. Rafi folded the tent while I held the bag open. He needed two attempts, but I did not count either one as wasted time.

1.
Which statement accurately describes the use of parentheses in paragraph 2?
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2.
Underline the sentence from paragraph 2 that demonstrates the use described in question 1.

3.
In paragraph 1, why are commas placed around “our most experienced camper”?
Question 3 options
4.
In paragraph 3, remove “—my choice for the morning—” from the sentence beginning “Our planned walk.” Which sentence remains?
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Edit Additional Diary Notes

These draft notes describe the same weekend. Preserve each sentence's meaning while setting off extra information correctly.

5.
The narrator has one camping notebook. Which revision correctly uses commas to set off its extra description?
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6.
Which revision correctly encloses the entire aside in parentheses?
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7.
Which revision correctly uses a pair of dashes to emphasize the extra information?
Question 7 options
8.
Sort the bracketed details. Use the context supplied with each sentence. Brackets identify the target words; they are not proposed punctuation.
9.
Find the punctuation problem: “Our folding table (a borrowed one, stood beside the tent.” Which change fixes it while keeping parentheses around the aside?
Question 9 options
10.
The campers packed several blankets. Only the blankets inside a blue bag stayed dry. Which sentence preserves that meaning?
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Final Diary Check

Check the boundaries of each aside. Keep punctuation paired when the main sentence continues after it.

11.
Which sentence correctly sets off both separate asides?
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12.
The narrator wants the final phrase to feel like an emphatic afterthought. Which revision correctly uses a dash?
Question 12 options
13.
Underline the two draft sentences that correctly set off the complete aside. The narrator has one notebook and one camping schedule.

14.
Revise this draft using commas, parentheses, or dashes to set off the extra information: “My camping schedule a neatly printed page stayed folded in my pocket.” Then explain why the detail should be set off and why your revision needs two punctuation marks.